Thursday, April 1, 2010

North Shore

I took this photo maybe 30 years ago in Hawaii. I'm looking for critiques.

2 comments:

RH Carpenter said...

Jane, is this a watercolor? Gosh, gorgeous colors and such power in the painting. The only thing I'd change is maybe that hard dark horizontal behind the main splashing wave - it seems to be a bit too severe all the way across? I see some other colors in the left side but not in the right so maybe add a few other colors or lift out some of the dark blue? Nothing else would I change and this is just beautifully done!

Michelle Himes said...

That's an awesome wave, Jane! You really nailed that splash. :-)