tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1437924337043204502.post8268188782527755699..comments2023-10-28T02:49:29.514-05:00Comments on Art by Jane James: Winterthur GlimpsesJanehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11975131477716764605noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1437924337043204502.post-43598641529836990622008-06-27T08:02:00.000-05:002008-06-27T08:02:00.000-05:00Jane,Since I have not painted anything with a coll...Jane,<BR/><BR/>Since I have not painted anything with a collage format I probably don't know what I am talking about here, but will talk anyway! <BR/><BR/>This is so masterfully drawn and composed, I love it! The architectural elements are softened by the flowers/foliage in front and the entire composition is just so warm and charming.<BR/><BR/>My one question is whether the foreground flowers and foliage might have a few more darks to separate them from the architectural elements behind them? I find I would like to consider that I am looking over the foreground flowers to see the buildings behind? If so, those would be a bit darker. This suggestion may go against your collage skills which might not require that we feel those flowers are in front of the buildings, so please correct me if I am speaking out of ignorance of the intent of collage.<BR/><BR/>Great painting....SusanWatercolors by Susan Roperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15091873961431846148noreply@blogger.com